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    dots Submission Name: Enduredots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Passion
    Total Views: 671
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1217



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    dotsEnduredots
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    Itís amazing... to see how we adapt

    The things we endure as people
    The thing that people do to others

    Positive or Negative
    We still keep going...

    One
    Step at a time

    One
    Day at a time

    This past month has shown me as I'm sure you can relate.
    Just how much we can endure
    Itís shown me, just how much I can endure

    Things happen that I would have never expected
    I do not feel I belong within the events that have occurred to me

    But I have overcome
    I have conquered
    I have endured...

    What I least expected
    And thatís all that matters

    One
    Step at a time

    One
    Day at a time




    Submitted on 2007-08-20 13:57:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is good, Jackie! Sometimes all we can do is endure, and sometimes enduring is the wise strategy. You have written this well! One with your talent will have to endure success before long!!!
    | Posted on 2007-08-20 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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