Description: It's about everything current with me. It's very metaphoric in the sense of it's meaning and purpose. It has alot of past transgretion of mine which is purely used as reference and metaphore.
Though it isn't finished yet, I'm pretty happy with how it's turning out so far. Let me know what ya'll think so far.
Your words have piqued my interest for sure and i would be curious to see where you take this piece from here. Might i make a small suggestion to you: In line 3 of stanza two I beleive you would be well served to change "scrapping" to read "scraping". It would tend to make much more sense.
Have a great day and keep writing, you have skills!