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    dots Submission Name: Just Another Stupid Love Poemdots

    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsJust Another Stupid Love Poemdots

    Laying next to you
    felling you lips againt my cheek
    ive missed this feeling
    the butterflies quickly return

    we have broken up
    but it feels like nothing has changed
    its the way you hold me the way you say my name
    im weak at the knees
    and my heart begins to race

    just being next to you
    is a feeling no one can replace
    i want to see you again
    but im scared to let you know

    the feelings that i have for you
    i really want to show
    but there is one problem
    and that is me and you

    there is no me and you
    and its tearing at my heart
    i try my best to get over you
    but when i see you
    im back at the start

    i need to hear the truth from you
    i need to know where i stand
    i need to know if i mean anything
    please help me understand

    i miss you and i love you
    its not something i can say
    the way i feel around you
    is something that wont go away

    Submitted on 2007-08-21 21:39:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this poem, it's sad i know how you feel though feeling for him what you know you shouldn't but you still do and your unsure of what he is thinking. Joanna
    | Posted on 2007-08-21 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]

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