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    dots Submission Name: just waitingdots
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    Author: rosesrouges
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    just waiting.
    For it to happen.
    For it to end.
    For it to to diminish the soul.
    For it to wake.
    For it to ask.
    For it to be great.
    For it to be afraid.
    for all these feelings,
    my loves,
    i pray my heart wont ache,
    when the end occurs.
    i love you alot,
    i hurt them sometimes,
    but i never stopped praying,
    for love when i'm alive
    tears roll down,
    as we each close our eyes,
    don't cry, be happy
    we'll see each other next time
    let's pray to God,
    all the time,
    Seek forgiveness
    in all bad times
    forgive and forget
    cliché, but true
    life's too short
    to be feeling angry and blue
    I love,
    I love,
    all of you so much
    i hope for strength in body and in mind
    God, i'm sorry
    i did this and that,
    give me patience
    as i beg to forget
    i love all,
    i love all,
    this world is a challenge for the end after all
    just waiting.




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      I try to remind myself to pray at times. I grew up on prayer and sometimes seem to forget that. Prayer brings peace of mind now who could do without that?

    On my knees,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2008-04-11 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this (prayer) if that's right. :) life is hard and God is the only one who you can truley trust and put your faith in especially when times get bad. really great job
    -Amber-
    | Posted on 2007-08-24 00:00:00 | by never_far_away | [ Reply to This ]


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