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    dots Submission Name: Breathlessdots
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    Author: Jingles
    ASL Info:    19.m.canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.08 - 18/60/36
    Words: 382
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Romance
    Total Views: 785
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 2380



    Description:
       OPinions.
    Its a song.
    And I havent written many.
    So take it easy on me.


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    dotsBreathlessdots
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    Let's start from the beggining again.
    Let's go back to how we used to be.
    Before the bruises and scars reminded us.
    When It was just you and me.

    These memories still blind us.
    But we have to help each other to see.
    Until we trust one another.
    Baby you and me, we will never be truly free.

    I love our moments of bliss.
    I love the taste of you're kiss.
    I try to tell you but you leave me breathless.
    Forever's never enough.
    The past will always haunt us.
    I try to tell you but you leave me breathless.

    Looks like we're back to the silence again.
    Trying to figure out what I did wrong,
    Drowning thoughts and sorrow in this vodka,
    Come back baby,Im lost, when you're gone.

    These memories still blind us.
    But we have to help each other to see.
    Until we trust one another.
    Baby you and me, we will never be truly free.

    I love our moments of bliss.
    I love the taste of you're kiss.
    I try to tell you but you leave me breathless.
    Forever's never enough.
    The past will always haunt us.
    I try to tell you but you leave me breathless.

    I love our moments of bliss.
    I love the taste of you're kiss.
    I try to tell you but you leave me breathless.
    Forever's never enough.
    The past will always haunt us.
    I try to tell you but you leave me breathless.


    I wonder if this fear will decide to fade.
    I wonder if youre love for me will remain.

    I wonder if we can go back to
    The way that it was.
    The way that it used to be.

    Let's start our beggining again.
    Let's start our beggining again.
    Let's start our beggining again.


    I love our moments of bliss.
    I love the taste of you're kiss.
    I try to tell you but you leave me breathless.
    Forever's never enough.
    The past will always haunt us.
    I try to tell you but you leave me breathless.

    I try to tell you but you leave me breathless.
    I try to tell you but you leave me breathless.
    I try to tell you but you leave me breathless.




    Submitted on 2007-08-22 21:38:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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