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    dots Submission Name: I Love You to the Moondots
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    Author: Magic Dragon
    Elite Ratio:    5.11 - 62/64/38
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsI Love You to the Moondots
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    Remember when I told you, "I love you to the moon"?
    I lied.
    I should have been more specific.
    I love you to that moon, way out there.
    The one past our moon.
    The one past the sun,
    And past Jupiter.
    The one outside of our galaxy.
    In the farthest reaches of the universe.
    It's the one so far our there, no one can ever reach it.
    It's on the very edge of space.
    Where time stands still,
    And our love can last forever.
    It's that bright star,
    Right there.
    So, next time I say,
    "I love you to the moon,"
    I'm really talking about
    that moon.
    You see, when you said your love for me is infinite,
    Mine is too,
    Because it continues to grow.
    With every breath you take,
    With every beat of your heart,
    With every moment of speechlessness I've experienced because you've stolen my breath,
    My love for you grows,
    Into,
    And for all eternity.




    Submitted on 2007-08-23 06:07:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      mmhmm... and what do you get from that love? what does that love bring you? perhaps love in such vast quantities is an infigment of one's imagination. Perhaps it is simply wonton lust. Or, perhaps, it is just such a need for a feeling of some kind that one puts such ideas in their own mind hoping that they will eventually become reality. I believe that this is what love is... strength beyond strength and weakness beyond weakness.
    enjoy
    | Posted on 2007-08-23 00:00:00 | by Old | [ Reply to This ]
      peanut butter pancakes rise to the challenge every single time, no, they won't let you down, not now, not ever. milk is also a friend, a companion. goat or cow or chocolate or strawberry it will always have your back. waffles have syrup traps. sometimes a good bowl of cereal will do the trick but I prefer peanut butter pancakes and milk or waffles with their syrup traps and milk and sausage never forget the sausage and it will never forget you. thats all
    thanks for letting me say what needed to be said
    Milo
    | Posted on 2007-08-23 00:00:00 | by Milo shanley | [ Reply to This ]


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