If and Would by truthbetold

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Submission Name: If and Would dots

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Author:	truthbetold
ASL Info:	20-f
Elite Ratio:	3.4 - 38/45/33
Words:	171

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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If and Would dots

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If I told you I loved you
what would you say
what would you do
only God will know

Would you say it back
or walk away
and ignore me
like most people do

If I took a bullet for you
would you do the same
or leave me to bleed
out the hole in my chest

If I told you my secret
would you spread it around
or keep it to yourself
and tell me yours

If I said you could trust me
would you believe me
or think I was lying
and never trust me

If I died the next morning
with my heart in my hand
would you get the message
that it's my gift to you

Would you even care
that every night
I would cry till i fell
into peaceless sleep

or am I not good enough
to gain your respect
or the love that you spread
to everyone but me.

Submitted on 2007-08-24 08:03:58 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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i really like this poem. it's really good questions to ask someone that you want attention from. really good job.
-Amber-
| Posted on 2007-08-24 00:00:00 | by never_far_away | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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