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    Author: vencix
    ASL Info:    16/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    1.42 - 14/78/49
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    As i stand in front of your tomb stone. Thinking of what the life we could of had together. Crying and trying to dry my eyes but i can't because you left me behind. With nothing but a memory. Of what we were as a cold wind starts to blow. I put on my jacket and start to walk home. But even thou it is on I am cold. And as the clod seeps into my bone's. A cold sleep takes hold. And as i turn around and look at your grave and head towards it i fall. As deaths arms embrace me and the wind blows i fall into a endless sleep. Never to wake up again.




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