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    dots Submission Name: shows cancelleddots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 647/1206/773
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 827
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1108



    Description:
       its a comp. of tv shows that i LOVED that got cancelled. lameass but fuck it.. i like it anyway.


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    dotsshows cancelleddots
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    Youre never going to help me now
    My show is cancelled
    and my life is down the drain
    and youre done for, but you can keep the alligator
    and can you explain it to me this time?
    Can you explain it all?

    Well youre not gonna save me now
    strongest man in the world and
    my favorite little flower girl
    just ink and cancelled tv
    and ive got red hair like you
    and youre in the unemplyment line this time

    its not like when we were kids
    and you were trapped in the box
    inside my living room
    ive got realer monsters now
    and less time for you
    but its ok
    cause youre GONE
    ick ick ick

    HEYY!!!
    with your stupid shaped head
    I miss you
    cause you made me feel
    like I wasnt the only loser
    and then i lost you
    and I didnt have anything left but a golden picture frame
    and a little blue hat

    doodoodoodoododododoodoodoodo
    *bark*
    fuck it
    everything goods gone






    Submitted on 2007-08-24 12:18:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Oh my god, this was so weird.
    But I loved it!
    How you didn't come out and say what it was but I understood what shows you were talking about.
    I understood completely your feelings as I read. And I think that's what's important in a poem. No matter what the subject is. Whether it's about canceled TV shows or abortion.
    Great poem! I enjoyed it so much.
    | Posted on 2007-08-25 00:00:00 | by doppelganger | [ Reply to This ]


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