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    dots Submission Name: Never did say goodbyedots
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    Author: soaring eyes
    ASL Info:    17/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 18/30/19
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 752
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 829



    Description:
       Chrystal Leigh Williams died five days after having a head on collision with another vehicle. On at the site of the accident we lost our fomer classmate Steven Wilson. Chrystal to me was a loving and thoughtful vivacious person and I will never forget her.
    ~I love you Chrystal


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    dotsNever did say goodbyedots
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    All things happen for a reason ... they say
    but each memory I had lingers on from day to day.
    i miss you and rest with peace for you I pray
    But I never did say good bye.

    It all happened so fast
    from the wreck to hosptial to horrible thoughts that won't past.
    I don't know what to say, do, or cast.
    But I never did say good bye

    All of these things happen to soon. i just remember you eating on the floor in the livingroom.
    But like your eyes the stars twinkle surrounding the moon.
    And I never did say good bye

    It will turn into tomorrow... today.
    And the sorrow will last forever and always
    but i will see you again when me meet on judgement day
    That's why i never did say good bye




    Submitted on 2007-08-24 12:40:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Rene, your words really are very moving. And what a friend you are to your friend. True friendship really is a rare and special thing.

    A wonderful write from you.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. i give you a wow. thats preety damn good
    | Posted on 2007-08-24 00:00:00 | by shygirl | [ Reply to This ]


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