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Never did say goodbye


Author: soaring eyes
ASL Info:    17/f/ga
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Class/Type: Poetry /
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Chrystal Leigh Williams died five days after having a head on collision with another vehicle. On at the site of the accident we lost our fomer classmate Steven Wilson. Chrystal to me was a loving and thoughtful vivacious person and I will never forget her.
~I love you Chrystal


Never did say goodbye



All things happen for a reason ... they say
but each memory I had lingers on from day to day.
i miss you and rest with peace for you I pray
But I never did say good bye.

It all happened so fast
from the wreck to hosptial to horrible thoughts that won't past.
I don't know what to say, do, or cast.
But I never did say good bye

All of these things happen to soon. i just remember you eating on the floor in the livingroom.
But like your eyes the stars twinkle surrounding the moon.
And I never did say good bye

It will turn into tomorrow... today.
And the sorrow will last forever and always
but i will see you again when me meet on judgement day
That's why i never did say good bye




Submitted on 2007-08-24 12:40:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Rene, your words really are very moving. And what a friend you are to your friend. True friendship really is a rare and special thing.

A wonderful write from you.

Frank.
| Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  wow. i give you a wow. thats preety damn good
| Posted on 2007-08-24 00:00:00 | by shygirl | [ Reply to This ]


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