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pay back

Author: shygirl
ASL Info:    16/f/ok
Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 71 /54 /14
Words: 61
Class/Type: Misc /Serious
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This is the discription of all thoughs people who think that it is fun to hurt and run. one day you will pay

pay back

in such selfish eyes,
I can see you cry.

Wth tears i hate,
I just can't wait.

You torment me,
as a sign of glee.

I await the day,
you go away.

I do not fear,
what I hear.

So know more dispise,
is in thine eyes.

You will see,
why its you not me.

Submitted on 2007-08-24 15:06:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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