Description: some silly little peice of my mind
say what you may
I LIKE MY MIND!!!
You are wonderful -------------------------------------------
you are my wonderful
I wish each day I could wake your face
if my wish came true
Id probably cry
Oh I am not sad lover
I am happy
You make all my wishes come true
fullfill this one?
I swear Ill love you forever
When I say 'I do'
As Ron says few words that have a lot to say, i really like this writing, and well that feeling is very good, that reminds me when i am with my girl, but to be honest, it doesnt happen anymore
so keep writing, and have a nice day
and if you have time please take a look to my writings,
peace and love
Victor
Not bad at all
You captured a lot of emotion in the few short words used
If this write had any flaw Iwould say it ended to quickly
Maybe add a little more to it if you want
But I stress this is your write
I would never tell someone how to write a write
Excellent Work
God Bless
Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
Ron
Submission Name: You are wonderful
