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    dots Submission Name: Ms. Divadots
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    Author: LoneWolf
    ASL Info:    16/F/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.35 - 136/108/19
    Words: 212
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 953
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1694



    Description:
       A few days ago I wrote this. Completely new style for me. It was written spur of the moment and I only type what came to me at the second of thinking

    the 'random' breaks in the sentence starting a new line is like an emphasis, not a new sentence, just to say

    I'm very tired right now so I hope that thsi description is in understandable English... my primary language, sadly enough


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    dotsMs. Divadots
    -------------------------------------------


    Don't want to say bad things about my friends
    but it so bothers me

    Creating an empire
    aroud herself
    unconsciously?
    I hope so

    Manipulative
    Sweetly so
    Generous
    Kind
    Your best friend
    Fashionable
    Pretty
    Gorgeous, in fact
    Make-up on
    Lastest clothes
    She's
    so
    damn
    perfect

    So WHY do you need the attention?
    Craving
    Starving
    Masked by your sugarcoated actions

    In being kind
    You create an aura
    of COOLNESS about yourself

    Make others crave you
    You're the Queen
    Only you can decide
    Who you talk to
    Everyone
    But who's your 'true' friends?

    Only the elite
    Only who you choose
    Only who you want
    Only those who pass
    Your twisted tests

    You're above us all
    Oh, how you see yourself
    Unconsciously, I hope
    You don't know

    Oblivious

    Trying to be so special
    It's all about you
    You're the Queen

    I love you honey
    But I can't stand this
    Get off your pedestal
    They may worship you
    But I open my eyes
    and see
    Nothing

    But your fragile ego
    Tender
    Vulnerable

    STOP

    Before you push away all you cling to
    As a friend
    I ask
    Please
    Give it up
    Your false title
    You gave yourself

    So fanfuckingtasic
    Ms. Diva




    Submitted on 2007-08-25 22:39:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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