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    dots Submission Name: "Dreaming of oceans".dots
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    Author: Magger32
    ASL Info:    18-female-PA.
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 53/131/124
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dots"Dreaming of oceans".dots
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    "Dreaming of oceans".
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    An arrow through my heart.
    Razor at my wrist.
    The bird soars through the sky.
    Through the clouds twists.

    Cold eyes stare at you from the lake bellow.
    Cold hands clasp yours,
    You can't let go.

    Face the rainbow or look towards the storm.
    Pacing down this long road you are forlorn.

    Feelings wrapped tight around your heart that has skipped a beat.
    The cold waves from the beach hit your feet.

    As you look up at the night sky.
    Ready to cry.







    Submitted on 2007-08-26 17:39:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is absolutely beautiful. I love the rhyme and better yet the poem flows nicely. It is also short and very to the point. "Feelings wrapped tight around your heart that has skipped a beat.
    The cold waves from the beach hit your feet" This has to be my favorite part of your poem.
    | Posted on 2007-08-27 00:00:00 | by takenspiritwind | [ Reply to This ]


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