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forced from behind

Author: ladiesplanet1
ASL Info:    23.cali baby
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Words: 159
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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i dont want to talk about it. i just want to cry. i hate myself.

forced from behind

i dont like the way you treat me
i dont like the way you beat me
i dont understand this pain
or why i feel this way
just make it go away
i cant stay -with you

you make my world blue
i cant be true to you
i dont know what to do
but im so through with you

we haven't even been together that long
but everything about you is wrong
in my world, you dont belong
im not that strong

you wasted two weeks of my time
and somehow in those days you made of blind

i listen to you apologize
but you cant dry my eyes
not after you're the one who made me cry
by raping me and stealing what was mine

i wont forgive your lies
not after you tore open my thighs
not after you forced me from behind
not after you made my world die

Submitted on 2007-08-27 05:05:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Girl I think you do need to kick this person to the curb - especially if there is physical altercations!

You deserve to be happy but you have to stop surrounding yourself with people who bring you down.

I send you love,peace,joy&smiles to share & some special ones just for you

tif ~*~
| Posted on 2007-08-27 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

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