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    dots Submission Name: Caples Sunrisedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
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    Bytes: 322



    Description:
       Sunrise from the mountain lake of Caples in California.

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    dotsCaples Sunrisedots
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    Sitting in the midst
    of my valley
    Mountain ranges
    encircle me
    And, morning
    is a ring of fire

    Light upon
    Life
    Spirit within
    Rises
    as the
    morning Sun

    Glimmering
    Being
    Rippling
    Wave
    Reflective




    Submitted on 2007-08-27 13:09:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thank you for taking me there for a moment to absorb some of the majesty of the surrounding mountains and contemplate the peaceful feeling of a quiet early morn in the valley. Your words make me wish I could see a photograph! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-03-12 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I can almost hear the silence, and feel the 'cold warmth' of a red morning. Not a lot of poems give beyond images of projected illusions... feelings. I think this one is among the few.

    Great Job!

    L. I.
    | Posted on 2007-08-28 00:00:00 | by -Lith-Ium- | [ Reply to This ]
      were these inner or outer mountains my friend??!! I feel I want to chewe on this piece and just fall into the weords to experience their meaning

    Kate
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    | Posted on 2007-08-28 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      Shucks, we have no mountains here in Central Florida, but we sure do have many many swamps. Have you ever seen morning rise in the swamp and the light playing off of the hanging spanish moss? Nice piece Tiffany.
    | Posted on 2007-08-27 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah the world is pretty nifty! I ve come to see some unbelievable places myself, heck, i m from Brazil!! it s pretty beautiful but I confess that, I don t have anything as beautiful as these valleys seem right out of my front door!! I preffer some pretty cool rhyming schemes myself, but.. this works! Nicee!!
    | Posted on 2007-08-27 00:00:00 | by brunov68 | [ Reply to This ]
      Your valley must be a sight for sore eyes !

    Another little gem from the pen of Tiffany.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2007-08-27 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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