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    dots Submission Name: Another Liedots
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    Author: I_m not Broken
    ASL Info:    17/F/IDK
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 91/98/68
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsAnother Liedots
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    I'm just living another lie

    Desperately trying to meet the eyes

    I can't please the masses around me

    Who the fuck do they want me to be

    Where the fuck is I supposed to go

    I'm drowning in a pool of lies

    I've tried over and over to apologize

    Can't live this way any longer

    Forgetting the truth, erase your soul

    My entire being has gone fucking cold

    Why doesn't anyone fight today?

    Spoon fed each and every bite

    Fear is holding us back

    Huddle up in a corner and disappear

    Scream inside and smile obediently

    The few who try to break free

    Smack them down and luck them up

    Smile obediently to keep y our freedom




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