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    dots Submission Name: Love Doesnt Mean Anything Anymoredots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLove Doesnt Mean Anything Anymoredots
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    missing you is not what hurts me

    knowing i cannot have you in my life

    destroys me

    i thought we where going strong

    until you backed off

    said i lied

    when i think you blamed it on me

    because your the one that lied inside

    you promised me forever

    you told me what i was

    you helped me find me

    and then you left

    i gave you my heart and all of my trust

    and all you could do

    was throw it around

    like their was nothing between us

    i kept loving you through and through

    but now i have to give up

    because i want to get over you

    you have destroyed me

    and how i used to be

    and now i cant sleep at night

    because maybe you where everything too me

    maybe one day you will see

    that our love could of went to extremes

    and maybe you will know

    i did love you so.




    Submitted on 2007-08-28 22:36:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      its very intence. I really liked it. good job.




    ~sweetme
    | Posted on 2007-08-29 00:00:00 | by sweetme16 | [ Reply to This ]


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