BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!!!
This Write reflects beautifully upon nature
Nature to me is so important to my positive outlook on life
She brightens up my face with a smile every day and every night of my life
I simply would be Lost without Her
I Thank God every day for gifting us with her Beautiful Preccense
Excellent Work Tiff
I am Truly one of your biggest Fans
I Simply Love how every write of yours reflects upon the Beauty of Nature
I enjoyed the read although the choppiness does stunt the flow of how I am used to reading poetry your pieces do make me stop and actually think about the words and wonder about them and why they have been expressed together. I do like how you break upo the words to crate different ways of looking at the word
This is a lovely poem, Tiffany, filled with energy, joy, and an acknowledgment of bounty! Delightful idea to compare the spirit to the endless cycle of rain, water, and the constant renewal of nature and energy! Top marks from me!
I can totally grasp your concept her; are you saying your spiritual links are one with nature and its cycles?
Thats what I got, I enjoyed my read of this because of your pure use of imagery, which so well fitted the theme.
Nice write,, ~ Love Matt