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    dots Submission Name: Reincarnationdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 636
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       Happy Day ES! Share some smiles

    tif ~*~

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    I AM
    countless droplets
    of water
    swimming as
    shining sea

    Glorious Sun
    glistening down
    upon me

    And, my spirit
    is a vaporous wave

    parched land to save

    Lifting above
    to form cloud

    Swirling & Twirling
    rumbling aloud

    Thunderous Delight

    I AM
    droplets again
    falling light

    Drenching ground
    Nature's Symphonic Sound


    Submitted on 2007-08-29 13:24:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    This Write reflects beautifully upon nature
    Nature to me is so important to my positive outlook on life
    She brightens up my face with a smile every day and every night of my life
    I simply would be Lost without Her
    I Thank God every day for gifting us with her Beautiful Preccense
    Excellent Work Tiff
    I am Truly one of your biggest Fans
    I Simply Love how every write of yours reflects upon the Beauty of Nature
    God Bless

    Please Keep In Touch
    | Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Tif,

    A beautiful work on how the Divine evolves everything back around to us, bright and new.

    I don't see a choppiness others have described. You use the words needed and nothing more to describe the path of water and how it replenishes.


    | Posted on 2007-09-03 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      I enjoyed the read although the choppiness does stunt the flow of how I am used to reading poetry your pieces do make me stop and actually think about the words and wonder about them and why they have been expressed together. I do like how you break upo the words to crate different ways of looking at the word

    | Posted on 2007-08-31 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a lovely poem, Tiffany, filled with energy, joy, and an acknowledgment of bounty! Delightful idea to compare the spirit to the endless cycle of rain, water, and the constant renewal of nature and energy! Top marks from me!
    | Posted on 2007-08-31 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I can totally grasp your concept her; are you saying your spiritual links are one with nature and its cycles?
    Thats what I got, I enjoyed my read of this because of your pure use of imagery, which so well fitted the theme.
    Nice write,, ~ Love Matt
    | Posted on 2007-08-29 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
    Sun shinny

    My description of your poem...and of you !

    | Posted on 2007-08-29 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      What a lovely imagery... it celebrates so many attributes of immortal, radiant soul... its limitlessness ... its eternal journey... on the whole, its ever RENEWING magnificence.

    One more beautiful epiphany .... so skillfully captured in words.
    | Posted on 2007-08-29 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]
      The content of your pieces certainly work to help get me past the choppiness of your delivery. It has become obvious to me that you will never waste any words and nothing will ever be superfluous.
    | Posted on 2007-08-29 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]

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