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    dots Submission Name: Delia mighty (Isla Tres trilogy, Pt III)dots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    dotsDelia mighty (Isla Tres trilogy, Pt III)dots
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    Delia mighty,
    Greatest of the three.
    An incredible place,
    many wonders to see.

    Greatest of the three,
    most mystical by far.
    Such magical beauty,
    nothing can mar.

    An incredible place,
    where beasts great reside.
    Never touched by evil,
    fear of death subsides.

    Many wonders to see,
    beautifuls creatures and shores.
    She loves growing things,
    and hatred abhors.

    Delia mighty,
    Greatest of the three.
    An incredible place,
    many wonders to see.




    Submitted on 2007-08-29 21:56:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like how you took each of the 3 poems and started with a point and ended with that same point. Thanks for sharing a new style of writing.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      Your poems were unique. I can't say that I liked or disliked them. Felt like you took a book you read and turned it into a poem.
    | Posted on 2007-08-30 00:00:00 | by Logic | [ Reply to This ]


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