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    dots Submission Name: Mera greater (Isla Tres trilogy, Pt II)dots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    dotsMera greater (Isla Tres trilogy, Pt II)dots
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    Mera greater,
    Kratos twin.
    A beautiful land,
    full of pleasures sin.

    Kratos twin,
    yet totally different.
    The same from afar,
    but towards pleasure bent.

    A beautiful land,
    never marred by death.
    Beautiful Faeries,
    with aphrodite's breath.

    Full of pleasures sin,
    love is a passing thought.
    Happy indulgences of life,
    only pleasure sought.

    Mera greater,
    Kratos twin.
    A beautiful land,
    full of pleasures sin.





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    ||| Comments |||
      I like where your going with this. I have not seen poetry done this way before and I might have to try it myself.
    Great write!!!
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not sure what this is, but I'll read the next one.
    | Posted on 2007-08-30 00:00:00 | by Logic | [ Reply to This ]


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