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    dots Submission Name: Kratos minor (Isla Tres trilogy, Pt. I)dots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    dotsKratos minor (Isla Tres trilogy, Pt. I)dots
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    Kratos minor,
    least of the great.
    Ever so fearsome,
    it's hunger to sate.

    Least of the great,
    yet feared most of all,
    None may escape
    it's fiery halls.

    Ever so fearsome,
    it devoures the flesh.
    Dark creatures lurking,
    all fears to refresh.

    It's hunger to sate,
    all it consumes.
    Never satisfied,
    it's feared shadow looms.

    Kratos minor,
    least of the great.
    Ever so fearsome,
    its hunger to sate.





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    ||| Comments |||
      Kind of reminded me of the game " God of War?"
    Well I liked it alot and even though I thought it was going to be a story I still really liked it.
    Great write! Keep up the great work.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      cool. I like what ur doing hur.

    Its nice and short and simple. so u keep the reader.


    peace
    Grim
    | Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it, it rythms very nicely and I love the flow. Good job ^-^
    | Posted on 2007-08-30 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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