Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Isla Tresdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 569
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 663



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsIsla Tresdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Beautiful sunsets,
    far off shores.
    Magical dreams
    of having more.

    Fantasy adventure,
    in forests of trees.
    Dangerous fun
    on the islands three.

    Kratos minor,
    least of the great.
    Ever so fearsome,
    its hunger to sate.

    Mera greater,
    Kratos twin.
    A beautiful land,
    full of pleasures sin.

    Delia mighty,
    Greatest of the three.
    An incredible place,
    many wonders to see.

    So many desires,
    So much to do.
    So many legends,
    Let's see if they're true.





    Submitted on 2007-08-29 22:05:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      cool poem.

    i like the end when u say lets see if they are true.

    it makes u want to live.


    Rip & Rot

    Grim
    | Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      To be quite honest I'm kinda lost. i'm not sure what this is about, i mean, i know it's about three islands; but is there more? well other than that i like the way you step it up.
    -Amber-
    | Posted on 2007-08-30 00:00:00 | by never_far_away | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    148727

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    The Abyss of Love written by poetotoe
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    The World written by jjd
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry