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    dots Submission Name: Isla Tresdots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsIsla Tresdots
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    Beautiful sunsets,
    far off shores.
    Magical dreams
    of having more.

    Fantasy adventure,
    in forests of trees.
    Dangerous fun
    on the islands three.

    Kratos minor,
    least of the great.
    Ever so fearsome,
    its hunger to sate.

    Mera greater,
    Kratos twin.
    A beautiful land,
    full of pleasures sin.

    Delia mighty,
    Greatest of the three.
    An incredible place,
    many wonders to see.

    So many desires,
    So much to do.
    So many legends,
    Let's see if they're true.





    Submitted on 2007-08-29 22:05:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cool poem.

    i like the end when u say lets see if they are true.

    it makes u want to live.


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    Grim
    | Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      To be quite honest I'm kinda lost. i'm not sure what this is about, i mean, i know it's about three islands; but is there more? well other than that i like the way you step it up.
    -Amber-
    | Posted on 2007-08-30 00:00:00 | by never_far_away | [ Reply to This ]


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