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    dots Submission Name: Summer gonedots
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    Author: sweetme16
    ASL Info:    18/f/who cares
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108/251/162
    Words: 231
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 108
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1329



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       this is about this summer. seeing all my old friends and making new friends. Working togther with my best friend and going on bike rides in the pouring rain. hoping that my senior year will be half as great as my summer before it was


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    dotsSummer gonedots
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    Looking back at my crazy summer
    Smiling at the memories
    Getting lost in the thoughts of everything that we did
    Feeling the wind in my fair from the days out in the boat or the ones we spend on our bikes on the open road
    Remembering the times we leaped and jumped out of the water
    Laughing at ourselves for forgetting to bring our shoes to the edge of the lake
    Tasting all the ice cream we ate as we ran though the summer days
    Smiling as I remember the messes we made
    Showing up at her house two minutes before we were leaving
    Covered head to toe in mud
    Laughing our way out of trouble
    Remembering all the jokes, tricks and pranks we pulled
    While all of us were stuck together at work
    Imagining the all the ice we shoved down each others shirts
    Almost still feeling the ice as it slipped down our backs in between our shoulder blades
    Together trying to come up with explanations on why our shirts were wet
    Tearing up as I remember the goodbye’s said to the old friends who went back to their lives
    Laughing as I remember the welcoming we gave to friends who came back after a whole summer gone
    Imaging what the coming year will bring
    And hoping that its as half as much fun as this summer has been




    Submitted on 2007-08-29 22:30:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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