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    dots Submission Name: why dots
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    Author: sweetme16
    ASL Info:    18/f/who cares
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108/251/162
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 156
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 455



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       this is about asking why to someone who hurt me really badly.


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    Why did I fall in love with you
    When we knew that it couldn’t be
    Why did you find a permanent place in my dreams
    And not make one for me in your arms
    Why did you make me laugh so hard all those time that I cried
    When you knew that you wouldn’t be there to wipe them
    When they turned to ones of sorrow
    Why did you take my heart
    When you weren’t willing to give yours for it






    Submitted on 2007-08-29 23:08:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      obviously, this is yet another case of mad boy disease, the horrifying epidemic sweeping the world. boys afflicted by mad boy disease show an extraordinary disregard for women and their ideas, feelings, etc. all boys suffering from mad boy disease tend to hurt people they claimed to love (women in particular). i extend my sympathies and express my concerns and hope that you find a more worthy boy, one not suffering from MBD.

    (as to your poem, i can relate from the bottom of my being and i thought it was brutally honest. you didnt even try to put on a brave face. you just pretty much said "it is what it is". trully inspiring.)

    cheers.
    | Posted on 2007-08-30 00:00:00 | by Alyra | [ Reply to This ]



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