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    dots Submission Name: All about perspective.dots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
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    Words: 100
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    dotsAll about perspective.dots
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    Between + 1 and - 1 lies zero.
    Neither negative or positive
    yet having the potential to flow either way.

    Am I the chicken or the egg first.
    My friend, you are whatever I cast my eye on you to see first
    for seeing is believing
    and NOW is the moment of choice.
    The egg got caught in blink time
    and so I saw the chicken first.

    And yet, said the man across the way
    who blinked at a different time,
    I swear 'twas the egg came first.

    Life experience is all about perspective!






    Submitted on 2007-08-30 17:37:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oooooooohhhh I love that word perspective, because not only in random events is it so shaping of our views, but it can also be used to impose a view on a matter (like the magician says, it's in the eye of the beholder) nice topic and nice write.

    ~Matt
    | Posted on 2007-09-03 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      So very true. I love metaphors and similies. This is a very clever way of explaining a concept that i recently shared with a much younger friend, who thought that certain people had lied to her when they told the same story from different perspectives.
    | Posted on 2007-09-02 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      This is cute and clever, and a light and enjoyable read, Kate!
    | Posted on 2007-09-01 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I just love the irony that weighs so heavily upon this piece, no matter how you look at it or just what perspective you may have. This piece was unique in its approach and devestating in its delivery. Bravoe...I say again BRAVO!
    | Posted on 2007-08-31 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      I like intriquing and seemingly non-sensical pieces that have deeper meanings - The title and the piece fit well and you relay that things that are seemingly "seen" are more matters of interpretation.

    Enjoyed this!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-08-31 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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