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    dots Submission Name: The Yearbook Photodots
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    Author: Saidin
    ASL Info:    16/M/BJ
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 11/19/17
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 148
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 642



    Description:
       A poem written when I suddenly saw my crush's photo somewhere.


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    dotsThe Yearbook Photodots
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    her hair flows down on her shoulders,
    mouth twisted into a curve facing up,
    like a smile. and
    dark eyes stare into mine, blank.
    feeling restless,
    being gazed upon by one not there,
    I divert my eyes through the window,
    open wide before
    me. I am elevated,
    my soul floats out of the body into the flood of light,
    just beyond the ledge.
    a flower lay there,
    its closed petals ripe with color,
    aroma already seeping through
    covers shut tight.

    I look back to the picture with the dimpled face,
    but I see her eyes no more




    Submitted on 2007-08-31 07:13:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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