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My Eternal Love Matters Not

Author: Magic Dragon
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Class/Type: Poetry /Death
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Enough said.

My Eternal Love Matters Not

Steal death from me
And give me Hell.
Tell the soul to rot,
Breath is but an obstacle.
Return to me my heart
Or crush it in your love.
Tomorrow I will revive you,
But for now,
Die for a better life.
Fate controls you,
You, the puppet,
I, the puppet master.
Float to the surface
And drown.
Relive your death.
Crimson tears,
Your poison.
Drink them
And join me in the pit of nothing.
Drink them
And finish last.
Your prize,
Eternal damnation.
Your fate is sealed.

Submitted on 2007-08-31 17:09:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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