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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    every past experiences makes you who you are today
    if that certain thing in your past never happend
    think about how much differnt you would be
    every one has a past
    though only people think of there own
    past usually lingers
    and never close that door
    the past its always open
    with many things to say
    but the one thing thats better than the past is the future that awaits






    Submitted on 2007-09-02 18:13:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it my favorite part is probably..

    the past its always open
    with many things to say
    but the one thing thats better than the past is the future that awaits

    It's nice to keep the future in mind instead of lingering in the past. Good write
    | Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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