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Author: justkillme08
ASL Info:    18/F/MA
Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97 /170 /124
Words: 78
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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every past experiences makes you who you are today
if that certain thing in your past never happend
think about how much differnt you would be
every one has a past
though only people think of there own
past usually lingers
and never close that door
the past its always open
with many things to say
but the one thing thats better than the past is the future that awaits






Submitted on 2007-09-02 18:13:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like it my favorite part is probably..

the past its always open
with many things to say
but the one thing thats better than the past is the future that awaits

It's nice to keep the future in mind instead of lingering in the past. Good write
| Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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