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    dots Submission Name: Forever, we'd be undefined.dots
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    Author: deegypook
    Elite Ratio:    3.18 - 3/2/12
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       i know im not very good. poetry is about expression, not revising until it fits into your ideas.


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    dotsForever, we'd be undefined.dots
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    oh what id give to see your thoughts

    the plot is keeping me distraught



    just for a glimpse of your insides

    id sacrifice my insight



    id rip mine out a thousand times

    so you could read between the lines



    i want to know from your head to your toes

    i need to see beyond your hair and your nose



    is there something really there?

    a mind like yours cannot be bare



    conversation goes only so far

    id like to know about each wound and scar



    if only you could share with me

    then one single being we could be



    id be bound to you by the mind

    forever we'd be undefined




    Submitted on 2007-09-02 23:45:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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