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    dots Submission Name: On Golden Wingsdots
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    Author: sugar_sweet
    ASL Info:    20/ Female/ Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 11/8/15
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 683
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    Description:
       I wrote this for my bird Sunny after she died.


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    dotsOn Golden Wingsdots
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    She rests now
    She lays still and tranquil
    Never to be woken
    Once so full of life
    you flew on golden wings
    Once when you were by my side
    you had a song to sing
    She's quiet now
    her once beautiful voice silenced
    Muted by the cruel fates
    Your golden wings are broken
    theres no mending them now
    Like an angel you lie before me
    Beautiful and still
    Perfect in your eternal slumber
    In my sorrow I cry out
    In my tears Ican hear your voice
    Your song echos within my heart
    You fly once more on golden wings




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