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Submission Name: cacoon dots

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Author:	layDsayD
ASL Info:	25/f/florida
Elite Ratio:	3.12 - 246/236/131
Words:	49

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
Total Views:	250
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	311

Description:
another repost you know the story didnt catch any attention the first time around thank all

cacoon

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Hello lovey
You look well
Where were you ?
What game shall we play ?
Your butterfly sufficates
Twisted in sticky web
The pills go down easier
Still no dreams come
The words meld togeather
Smeared,like so many faces
Where have you been ?

Submitted on 2007-09-03 19:36:05 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  I like it. Its like you're talking in metaphors. and it has tinge of passionate longing
| Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by sango_amaya | [ Reply to This ]
  I like that the poem sends a mixed message. but i'm kind of confused about the theme??
| Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by chini | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this. It seems like cut out scene from life of so many of us. One scene that speaks so much.
| Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by Poly Jean | [ Reply to This ]

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