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To My Eldest Sister

Author: babytinkerbelle
ASL Info:    26/f/aus
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This poem I found on the web so I didn't write it, but it explains my feelings for my sister perfectly

To My Eldest Sister

To My Eldest Sister

We've shared laughter
We've shared tears
Loves lost, love found
Though it all we've stayed together
From heart breaks, to soul mates
From life’s hardships, to life’s happiness
Our stupid fights
Our silly nights
We've been there and done it
We've seen life end and life begin
And the joy I felt when you had your first kid
Can never be replaced
Now you’re gone
We don't share each others time
But you’re still with me everyday and night
No matter how far you are
You will always be
My favorite sister.

I found this poem on the internet by Robin S. Holtgrefe, it explains my feelings towards my sister almost perfectly, although my sister and I are still close, I feel like I have lost her because we don’t see each other as often as we used to, she’s is the strongest woman I know, able to fight when others would give up, where I would fail she gives me the strength to keep going, I only hope she knows how special she is to me and how much I value our friendship and that we can get it back on track.

Submitted on 2007-09-03 20:32:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  hey its me lol....check out pauls writing and the site i made....there should be an article in mondays (19th) herald four...hugs...stormy
| Posted on 2007-11-18 00:00:00 | by Pizzolopoetry | [ Reply to This ]
I know through corresponding with you through the Years just how Important Stormies Friendship is to you
I also am sure she knows it well and Loves you just as much
I have a very Strong relationship with my sister as well and she also means the World to me
Excellent Job!!!
God Bless

Please keep in touch!!!
| Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  Thank you. ditto. This was unexpected, to be honest I was a little scared this was going to tell me off for not going to family functions. LOL
| Posted on 2007-09-03 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a really sweet poem. I can relate. My brother and I are very close, and ever since he went off to college, it's really hard to keep in contact with him. I miss him a whole lot, and you probably know how guys can be with returning phonecalls and whatnot. Siblings are amazing once you outgrow the hating eachother phase.
| Posted on 2007-09-03 00:00:00 | by Venia | [ Reply to This ]

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