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    dots Submission Name: To My Eldest Sisterdots
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    Author: babytinkerbelle
    ASL Info:    26/f/aus
    Elite Ratio:    5.25 - 310/209/42
    Words: 217
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       This poem I found on the web so I didn't write it, but it explains my feelings for my sister perfectly


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    dotsTo My Eldest Sisterdots
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    To My Eldest Sister

    We've shared laughter
    We've shared tears
    Loves lost, love found
    Though it all we've stayed together
    From heart breaks, to soul mates
    From life’s hardships, to life’s happiness
    Our stupid fights
    Our silly nights
    We've been there and done it
    We've seen life end and life begin
    And the joy I felt when you had your first kid
    Can never be replaced
    Now you’re gone
    We don't share each others time
    But you’re still with me everyday and night
    No matter how far you are
    You will always be
    My favorite sister.

    I found this poem on the internet by Robin S. Holtgrefe, it explains my feelings towards my sister almost perfectly, although my sister and I are still close, I feel like I have lost her because we don’t see each other as often as we used to, she’s is the strongest woman I know, able to fight when others would give up, where I would fail she gives me the strength to keep going, I only hope she knows how special she is to me and how much I value our friendship and that we can get it back on track.




    Submitted on 2007-09-03 20:32:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey its me lol....check out pauls writing and the site i made....there should be an article in mondays (19th) herald sun...pg four...hugs...stormy
    | Posted on 2007-11-18 00:00:00 | by Pizzolopoetry | [ Reply to This ]
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    I know through corresponding with you through the Years just how Important Stormies Friendship is to you
    I also am sure she knows it well and Loves you just as much
    I have a very Strong relationship with my sister as well and she also means the World to me
    Excellent Job!!!
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please keep in touch!!!
    | Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Thank you. ditto. This was unexpected, to be honest I was a little scared this was going to tell me off for not going to family functions. LOL
    | Posted on 2007-09-03 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a really sweet poem. I can relate. My brother and I are very close, and ever since he went off to college, it's really hard to keep in contact with him. I miss him a whole lot, and you probably know how guys can be with returning phonecalls and whatnot. Siblings are amazing once you outgrow the hating eachother phase.
    | Posted on 2007-09-03 00:00:00 | by Venia | [ Reply to This ]


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