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    dots Submission Name: Greenhouse Romancedots
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    Author: saartha
    ASL Info:    27/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 230/393/145
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsGreenhouse Romancedots
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    I called you
    my precious Paracelsus
    when you tended plants,
    browned fingers digging
    deep into the thick soil
    as arcane spagyric chants
    filled the room
    like sunshine.

    You would laugh and bury me
    in arms smelling like rustic earth
    and effortlessly whispered
    long strings of syllables--

    Philippus Theophrastus Bombastus von Hohenheim,
    said like a sigh, or a smile--
    and the strings twisted on themselves,
    forming a bridge from mouth to ear.

    My panacea,
    I replied.
    My panacea.




    Submitted on 2007-09-03 22:03:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is pretty. I had to look up some stuff, which is always distracting. But once I knew what you were writing about, it worked great.

    I loved the gardening bit as a metaphor for your relationship.

    It's all very... floating. Like a rain goddess or something... A very soft and pretty piece.
    | Posted on 2008-01-13 00:00:00 | by sadtrapofgravit | [ Reply to This ]


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