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    dots Submission Name: Missing Mondaydots
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    Author: Keiran
    ASL Info:    20/M/NZ
    Elite Ratio:    5.64 - 40/47/33
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 895
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 825



    Description:
       Tell your thoughts. I would love to hear them, good or bad.

    ~Keiran~


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    dotsMissing Mondaydots
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    Pound your head against the thick grey wall
    If your life's about to fall tragically
    Out of sync
    With everyone elses picket fence existence

    Stress is like me
    Making it through the week
    Without missing a beat
    Check out the lyrical flow

    I'm probably kidding myself
    My songs are like my singing voice
    They suck

    But if you're deceived
    Then let's not break this spell
    It could end well
    If you're
    Fractured
    Uncertain
    Unexcitable
    Missing Monday

    I'm not waxing lyrics
    With honey so sweet
    Or a smooth and shiny polish
    I'm just trying to make you feel

    And I'm trying to make me feel
    Again




    Submitted on 2007-09-04 06:07:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this has a lovely idea behind it, and the way you write makes me think of beat poetry in shady cafes and clubs, where the customers are draped in blacks, grays and other dark colors
    i see a man on a small stage, reading, his long dark hair pulled back into a low pony tail, his voice soft but sure, and reverberating throught the crowd
    this isnt a style that i love so much, but i respect it, and I like the feel of it in my head
    so good job
    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]


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