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    dots Submission Name: Clothespin Jesusdots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 29/60/51
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsClothespin Jesusdots
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    Clothespin Jesus, you died for my sins
    Ol'e Clothespin Jesus, all made out of clothespins
    Hey Clothespin Jesus, you know you're lookin' rather thin
    Aren't they feeding you well in Clothespin Heaven?

    Clothespin Heaven, it awaits for you and me
    Clothespin Heaven, it's where we hang the pure laundry
    Clothespin Heaven, all the clean linens and white sheets
    I bet you think I'll be alone, but Clothespin Jesus mounts his throne
    In Clothespin Heaven




    Submitted on 2007-09-04 09:59:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      well, that was extremely interesting...

    I don't know what to say...I don't think it was supposed to evoke a laugh, but it did...

    Sorry???

    But I do like it...
    | Posted on 2007-09-05 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      I too am not sure I understand the imagery; however, this does make me think back to my (much) younger years and vacation bible school -- making crucifixes and such from clothespins or ice cream sticks. I think ron pretty much summed up the feeling I get as well.
    In any case, this was interesting even if I did miss out on the sybolism.
    | Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by bentnotbroken | [ Reply to This ]
      As my good friend Ron said, I don't understand the symbolism you were going for in this piece.
    | Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      I dont fully understand the meaning of this write and I have to admit for the first time in a while
    I have been stumped
    This goes together very well and flows quite well
    If I had to guess I would say you are referring to The Loving God as A Clothespin because a Clothespin is never selfish and only has one thing on its mind and that is to Help us daily the same way The Lord Helps us move forward Daily
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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