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    dots Submission Name: Brother My Brother (Blessed Union Of Souls)dots
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    Author: Lord Bane
    ASL Info:    24/M/Isle of Wight, UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 40/81/50
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 996
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1732



    Description:
       I'm posting this for two reasons: 1) I love this song, and 2) considering all the wars in the world, I think this is a very good anti-war song. I will post new stuff actually BY ME soon, I promise. Note: this is on the soundtrack to the original Pokemon film.


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    dotsBrother My Brother (Blessed Union Of Souls)dots
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    Brother my brother
    Tell me what are fighting for
    We've got to end this war
    We should love one another
    Oh, can't we just pretend
    This war never began
    We can try
    Brother my brother

    We face each other from different sides
    The anger burns can't remember why
    It's kindof crazy to cause so much pain
    Our foolish pride makes us hate this way

    We watch our world fall apart
    Tell me what good is winning
    When you lose your heart

    Brother my brother
    Tell me what are fighting for
    Isn't life worth so much more
    We should love one another
    Oh, can't we just pretend
    This war never began
    Tell me why
    Brother my brother

    Yes
    We can try
    Brother my brother
    Yes

    Let's take a moment and look deep inside
    And say we'll learn to give love a try
    When matters differ as we seem to be
    There's so much more to me than what you see

    You don't have to be this way
    Think about the consequences
    Turn around and walk away

    Brother my brother
    Tell me what are fighting for
    Isn't life worth so much more
    We should love one another
    Oh, can't we just pretend
    This war never began
    Tell me why
    Brother my brother

    Brother my brother
    Tell me what are fighting for
    Isn't life worth so much more
    We should love one another
    Oh, can't we just pretend
    This war never began
    Tell me why
    Brother my brother




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      This is really meaningful, it struck me because it is somewhat typical, but at the same time the refrain makes it profound. Great job!
    | Posted on 2008-11-05 00:00:00 | by Anneboleyn707 | [ Reply to This ]


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