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    dots Submission Name: Night Wishesdots
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    Author: darkwiccan14
    ASL Info:    15/F/My chair
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 125/125/88
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 118
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 666



    Description:
       a tester! for seein if i gotz my mad skillz bac xD


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    dotsNight Wishesdots
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    Night winds strong
    tapping alongside my windows
    each beat a new or forbidden
    memory.

    the rain drips down
    in some hypnotic hype
    I lay there wishing to feel
    the summer breeze.

    I can't help but to think
    what my life would be
    with or without
    you in my thoughts.

    Nothing can blow it away
    for in my heart you stay
    I feel an outcast from my
    friends who drink and smoke
    pot.

    But this is the price I bought
    Without or with you
    and;
    to tell you the truth
    You're all I got.




    Submitted on 2007-09-04 18:53:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      mad mad skills buddy! I luv it. I think one of the reasons I liked it so much is because I can easily realate to it because of how you wrote the poem. :) good job.
    | Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by xaingua | [ Reply to This ]



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