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By you


Author: xaingua
ASL Info:    16/Female/A quiet place
Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 11 /9 /11
Words: 209
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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If you ever found that one person who impacted your world strongly that you feel yourself as part of them, then you know what this means.


By you



By your hands I can feel
By your hands I can touch the distant
By your hands I can hold
And push away all the world's resistance

By your arms I can embrace
By your arms I can always keep you near
By your arms I can wave
away the hurt that has no place here

By your ears I can hear
By your ears I can live your memories
By your ears I can fall
Into your thoughts, because my own are empty

By your eyes I can see
By your eyes I can blink away the past
By your eyes I can cry
All the things I've suffered from at last

By your voice I can speak
By your voice I can tell you so many things
By your voice I can join
In with the song your heart offers to me

By your lungs I can breath
By your lungs I can inhale your sweet scent
By your lungs I can live
A life without a reason to repent

And by your heart I can love
By your heart I can find my own heart beat
By your heart I can rest
Because you've given all you have to me.




Submitted on 2007-09-04 19:45:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like it it's very sweet. Good write. ^-^
| Posted on 2007-09-05 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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