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If you ever found that one person who impacted your world strongly that you feel yourself as part of them, then you know what this means.
By your hands I can feel
By your hands I can touch the distant
By your hands I can hold
And push away all the world's resistance
By your arms I can embrace
By your arms I can always keep you near
By your arms I can wave
away the hurt that has no place here
By your ears I can hear
By your ears I can live your memories
By your ears I can fall
Into your thoughts, because my own are empty
By your eyes I can see
By your eyes I can blink away the past
By your eyes I can cry
All the things I've suffered from at last
By your voice I can speak
By your voice I can tell you so many things
By your voice I can join
In with the song your heart offers to me
By your lungs I can breath
By your lungs I can inhale your sweet scent
By your lungs I can live
A life without a reason to repent
And by your heart I can love
By your heart I can find my own heart beat
By your heart I can rest
Because you've given all you have to me.
Submitted on 2007-09-04 19:45:59
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I like it it's very sweet. Good write. ^-^
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