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    dots Submission Name: By youdots
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    Author: xaingua
    ASL Info:    16/Female/A quiet place
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 11/9/11
    Words: 209
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1023
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       If you ever found that one person who impacted your world strongly that you feel yourself as part of them, then you know what this means.


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    dotsBy youdots
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    By your hands I can feel
    By your hands I can touch the distant
    By your hands I can hold
    And push away all the world's resistance

    By your arms I can embrace
    By your arms I can always keep you near
    By your arms I can wave
    away the hurt that has no place here

    By your ears I can hear
    By your ears I can live your memories
    By your ears I can fall
    Into your thoughts, because my own are empty

    By your eyes I can see
    By your eyes I can blink away the past
    By your eyes I can cry
    All the things I've suffered from at last

    By your voice I can speak
    By your voice I can tell you so many things
    By your voice I can join
    In with the song your heart offers to me

    By your lungs I can breath
    By your lungs I can inhale your sweet scent
    By your lungs I can live
    A life without a reason to repent

    And by your heart I can love
    By your heart I can find my own heart beat
    By your heart I can rest
    Because you've given all you have to me.




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      I like it it's very sweet. Good write. ^-^
    | Posted on 2007-09-05 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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