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    dots Submission Name: Incantationdots
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    Author: eliwhitneyradio
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 49/51/13
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 708
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    Description:
       Just a poem I wrote about a magician.


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    dotsIncantationdots
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    THIS IS MY NEXT TO LAST!
    trick,
    shouted the magician
    before transforming his
    wand into [ZAPPP!] a cigarette.

    Then he announced he had
    decided to quit smoking
    and walked off the stage.

    Applause.




    Submitted on 2007-09-06 01:06:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      haha! good one....the irony! im tryin to quit myself...i wish i was a magician
    | Posted on 2007-12-01 00:00:00 | by iaida | [ Reply to This ]
      yay!!!!!!

    i <3 magicians!

    i like the way its presented with a flourish of sorts!

    =]
    carol
    | Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      I like...

    Very theatrical...

    Also, a veer away from typical topics....

    Four stars!!!

    | Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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