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    dots Submission Name: Lesson In Lifedots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsLesson In Lifedots
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    Theres a lesson in life,
    That one must come about,
    It creeps and it hides,
    Planting a seed that,
    Slowly begins to sprout.

    There`s teachings in life,
    That can`t prepare you for weeping,
    And no matter how hard you try,
    You can presence the feeling.

    One learns
    When life is put to rest,
    How sad, that Im willing,
    To learn my lesson,
    Until I can presence my death.





    Submitted on 2007-09-06 11:41:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I've enjoyed reading this poem. It seems like you really know what you're talking about.

    One learns
    When life is put to rest,
    How sad, that Im willing,
    To learn my lesson,
    Until I can presence my death.

    I love this stanza because I can relate somewhat. It's not often that I read a poem that I can relate to. Good job, and keep it up.
    AnGeL

    | Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]


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