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    dots Submission Name: He's A Dumbassdots
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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsHe's A Dumbassdots
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    you tell me things
    you make me confused
    it's either you dont want me
    or you do
    make up your mind boy
    just tell me the truth
    nothing ever makes sense anymore
    since the day i met you
    now i just feel your shallow and low
    because of the things you say
    and somethings you do
    your fucking stupid kyle
    all she's doing is playing you
    shut her down
    throw her away
    and get someone new
    you know how i feel
    yet you dont care
    its like you want me to wait
    but i just cant
    my feelings are changing
    and im startin to cave in
    to this new feeling
    for someone new
    yes this new feelings not for you




    Submitted on 2007-09-06 19:45:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, this is really well thought out.
    i once had a man who was cheating on me,...then after i heard about it, i dicided to comfront him,...then HE accussed ME of cheating,...that if I wernt the on cheating, then i wouldent have to ask HIM about it,...AND BROKE UP WITH ME,...dose that make ANY sence at ALL??!
    well anywhy, i really enjoyed this. good job!
    | Posted on 2008-03-12 00:00:00 | by being me | [ Reply to This ]


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