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Submission Name: I Love You dots

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Author:	skinnard
ASL Info:	22 male New York
Elite Ratio:	2.17 - 38/76/49
Words:	155

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	730
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	928

Description:
i havent written a love poem in a looooooooooooooooooooonnng time :- so, let me know what you think

I Love You dots

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My angel, my heart
My light in the dark
You hold half of me
Shall we never be apart

I'm lost in your eyes
Like the deep blue sea
You're so precious to me
As the air I breathe

Your smile could illuminate
Even the darkest of rooms
Your voice my favorite sound
A melodic tune

I love you with all my heart
Merely words from a pen
There's no way to express
How much I'll love you til the end

No words to describe
How you make me feel inside
You are my world
And without you I would die

I savor every kiss
And love each memory
My hunny bunny baby :)
Oh how much you mean to me

I will never let you go
For then I would be a fool
So I want you to know
Just how much I love you

Submitted on 2007-09-07 05:27:13 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Most of this is good, but there are some sections that you could do much better on I believe. Continue to write though, you do have something worth being spoken and heard.
| Posted on 2007-09-07 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.