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    dots Submission Name: The Perfect Circledots
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    Author: kingsley
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 100/59/46
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    Description:
       the choice is your but remember tomorrow is another day


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    dotsThe Perfect Circledots
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    The sky sleeps,
    leaving the world to itself,
    hoping that tomorrow;
    the world will grow,
    into an age it has not seen before.

    The sky smiles;
    bringing life with him into the world.
    He knows that tomorrow;
    he will go back to sleep;
    waking up to cast his spell once again




    Submitted on 2007-09-07 10:40:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very optimistic. It made me smile. It's perfect.
    | Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]
      This makes a good point. I love how so little can be said but it means so much. This is one of those. I enjoyed, I'd like to read more of your work.
    | Posted on 2007-09-08 00:00:00 | by canarddoue | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it. there seems like there should be more to it but still this is a good piece. continue to post. i enjoys your work a lot. thanks for sharing.





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    | Posted on 2007-09-07 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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