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    dots Submission Name: The Secret Reach (Of your Nihilistic Neighbor)dots
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    Author: Ratiomeducet
    ASL Info:    27/M/Austin, TX
    Elite Ratio:    4.58 - 104/147/44
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Secret Reach (Of your Nihilistic Neighbor)dots
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     I greet you in the morning when you step out side to put the garbage away. Hello, old friend, I say. Care for a puff, I say? You yawn and say to-hell-with-it, I smile and give you a cigarette.

    And with a flick and a spark,
    You puff puff, and time stops.

    You are bombarded by thoughts,
    thoughts upon thoughts are wrought!
    Thoughts of deconstruction.
    Thoughts of mayhem.
    Ideas of ends,
    And thoughts of new ideas to think about
    what to do
    when you're tired of being told
    what to do!

    And every time you are told
    what to do,
    You will not forget,
    when you evilly puff away
    at my brand of cigarettes,
    That their breath is meaningless
    and their meanings don't exist!




    Submitted on 2007-09-07 23:25:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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