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    dots Submission Name: Just maybedots
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    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 64/90/75
    Words: 276
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    Description:
       Worthlessness, everyone feels it at some point in their life...do you feel worthy?...does anyone...what makes us feel so unworthy of anything in life like we're nothing?


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    dotsJust maybedots
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    hide my hands
    into my pockets
    look down in shame
    i am not worthy

    scream while you claw at your face
    you don't deserve this skin
    bash your knuckles against the wall
    you are not worthy

    cry want to die
    bring yourself
    to battered knees
    wish away
    it makes no diffrence
    all that matters is to bleed
    because you
    are not worthy

    be thee abused
    cower
    becoming abuser
    be critisized
    cry
    an ignorant know it all
    stand above a mirror
    just to
    watch yourself fall

    caged in life
    whipped until you are free
    free to lay there
    cry and bleed
    so be
    be afraid to get up
    and lock the chain around your own ankle
    get up and leave
    forever this forced feeling
    of unworthy

    so take take the blade
    that you have forged yourself
    from childhood
    to early teen
    that have finally stopped now
    unseen scars in your mind
    you let time
    escape you
    all these past memories
    that fester inside
    thinking
    just let them rape you

    hide your hands
    look down in shame
    play this aweful
    sadistic game
    but don't close the eyes
    there's still so much more to see
    go ahead
    just wipe this slate clean
    look a little harder
    a little longer
    because just maybe you are worthy




    Submitted on 2007-09-07 23:29:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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