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    dots Submission Name: My dirty little secretdots
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    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 64/90/75
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 1043
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsMy dirty little secretdots
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    you shine with love
    yet you reflect my fear
    you hurt me so good
    love slipping through a tear

    i hold you close
    and yet so far
    you're my only escape
    you're my bright shinning star

    my love for you
    is greater than words
    utter madness seeps in
    i'm torn between worlds

    but you keep me here
    i keep sanity
    still tearing apart
    you complete me

    i love you so much
    to me you're everything
    i don't mind that when you touch
    bloody love is what you bring

    but i hide you from the world
    and i keep it that way
    You're me dirty little secret
    whom i love everyday

    you turn my pain into pleasure
    blood dripping from my finger tips
    To my one any only razor
    The words "i love you" escape my lips.




    Submitted on 2007-09-07 23:38:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i really like how you wrote this, well done.
    | Posted on 2007-11-11 00:00:00 | by Nessyjane | [ Reply to This ]
      nice job i really liked it, i think many people love there item of inflicted pain. but that was a very nice way to exlpain how people look at there razor or what ever they use.
    | Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by SickOfHurting U | [ Reply to This ]


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