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What do I have to do to make you proud? Just to try to get your attention I scream aloud. But all the screaming I do doesnt seem to make you move. What can i do to impress you? I sing my heart out. But all the you do is scream and shout. All these questions run through my head. Like a nightmare never ending. Are you really that blind to see that something perfect has been staring right at you? What do you see in her? She's a whore and nothing more. But then again i guess thats what you go for. How can you fall for her? All she ever did was use you and break your heart. But i know I'll always be the best friend and never the girlfriend. All these questions run through my mind. Like a nightmare never ending. Are you really that blind to see that something perfect has been staring right at you. But I know I'll always be the best friend and never the girlfriend. |
i dont get 'him' at all he acts like he likes you he just wont admit it ohhh myy goodness i still love you and dont forget what i said u can convert ahahahaha ily | Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by truthbetold | [ Reply to This ] | Yes nice poem, I know what you mean! Maybe edit the 6th line. I think you could have went deeper into the situation, if you know what I mean. But I think it is still very good. I enjoyed it alot. | | Posted on 2007-09-10 00:00:00 | by DeVille_85 | [ Reply to This ] | Good piece but very general. Girl likes guy/guy likes girl but its never noticed. I would have poured more detail into it. But all in all a good poem. | | Posted on 2007-09-09 00:00:00 | by Hazy skies | [ Reply to This ] | |