angel's can die too...i kno cuz i am 1... by Darc Angel

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Submission Name: angel's can die too...i kno cuz i am 1... dots

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Author:	Darc Angel
ASL Info:	18/m/ny
Elite Ratio:	3.95 - 10/5/56
Words:	140

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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i have 2 personalities and 1 is an angel and he died...

angel's can die too...i kno cuz i am 1... dots

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Wings as black as my heart is cold
Eyes like blue fire
Lips red as a cherry.

Standing in the back of my heart
Watching everyone from a distance
Waiting for someone to mess up

Cast out, not wanted
Find your way home
Wanted by no one, not even hell will take you

Tears from those blue flames
Not crying on the outside
Wanting to die on the inside

Waiting for someone to come save me
I've heard it's okay to cry too much
It's a lost meaning

Locked up never to get out
The pain of losing someone so close
Not understanding why

I left without a word
Left to wonder why
You left this dark angel with broken wings.....

This text is courier

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