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    dots Submission Name: angel's can die too...i kno cuz i am 1...dots
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    Author: Darc Angel
    ASL Info:    18/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 10/5/56
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       i have 2 personalities and 1 is an angel and he died...


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    dotsangel's can die too...i kno cuz i am 1...dots
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    Wings as black as my heart is cold
    Eyes like blue fire
    Lips red as a cherry.

    Standing in the back of my heart
    Watching everyone from a distance
    Waiting for someone to mess up

    Cast out, not wanted
    Find your way home
    Wanted by no one, not even hell will take you

    Tears from those blue flames
    Not crying on the outside
    Wanting to die on the inside

    Waiting for someone to come save me
    I've heard it's okay to cry too much
    It's a lost meaning

    Locked up never to get out
    The pain of losing someone so close
    Not understanding why

    I left without a word
    Left to wonder why
    You left this dark angel with broken wings.....



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