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Author: huntingjonathon
ASL Info:    31/M/San Fran
Elite Ratio:    3 - 69 /117 /61
Words: 104
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Raining down
an uncanny frown
of yesteryear’s wishes,
I fill the time
with verse and rhyme
and shower all with kisses.

Still everything
seems to ring
of altering disguise,
As I lay
amidst the day
when I open my blind eyes.

Forgetful naught
that we taught
the youth to dream away,
I stave off
the incessant cough
of unhealthy foray.

As I breed
and sometimes bleed
from the fallen skies,
‘Tis the past
that I lack
as I open these blind eyes.

-jonathon shank

Submitted on 2007-09-10 02:41:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i really like this i do..the only i'd have to say i didn't is when you say: ai i breed and sometimes bleed... it's good but didn't quite seem to flow with the rest of it because it was so blunt unlike the rest of it...but other than that it was very well written
| Posted on 2007-09-10 00:00:00 | by taintedsmiles | [ Reply to This ]

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